From 3997f62b8a2295973d743a46f5e84a9b3a483437 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Simon Michael <simon@joyful.com>
Date: Wed, 17 Feb 2016 10:00:01 -0800
Subject: [PATCH] tweak gui questions

---
 index.html | 6 +++---
 index.md   | 9 ++++-----
 2 files changed, 7 insertions(+), 8 deletions(-)

diff --git a/index.html b/index.html
index ff0c741..e7b988e 100644
--- a/index.html
+++ b/index.html
@@ -58,10 +58,10 @@ Plain Text Accounting
 </div>
 <div class="three columns">
 <h3 id="questions">questions ?</h3>
-<p><strong>do I really have to use only text ?</strong><br />
-No! Not entirely. Just a bit. Decreasingly. <strong><a href="#ui-console">GUIs</a></strong> are appearing.</p>
+<p><strong>is there no graphical user interface ? is this only for text fanatics ?</strong><br />
+Not entirely! Just a bit. Decreasingly. <strong><a href="#ui-console">GUIs</a></strong> are appearing.</p>
 <p><strong>who is this for ?</strong><br />
-Techies, power users, and do-it-yourself-ers willing to use a <strong><a href="https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Text_editor">text editor</a></strong>, for now. If you need a rich GUI and lots of structure, you may prefer a traditional GUI tool.</p>
+Techies, power users, and do-it-yourself-ers, for now. If you need a rich GUI providing lots of structure, you may prefer to use something else.</p>
 <p><strong>what are the alternatives ?</strong><br />
 FOSS tools like GNUCash, Grisbi, KMyMoney, proprietary tools like Quicken/Quickbooks, You Need A Budget, online tools like Xero, FreeAgent, spreadsheets, paper accounting. (There are <strong><a href="https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Comparison_of_accounting_software">many</a></strong>).</p>
 <p><strong>why is this better than QuickBooks ?</strong><br />
diff --git a/index.md b/index.md
index 85ac9e7..78895d7 100644
--- a/index.md
+++ b/index.md
@@ -70,13 +70,12 @@ This simple model makes them easy to understand and rely on.
 
 ### questions ?
 
-**do I really have to use only text ?**\
-No! Not entirely. Just a bit. Decreasingly. **[GUIs](#ui-console)** are appearing.
+**is there no graphical user interface ? is this only for text fanatics ?**\
+Not entirely! Just a bit. Decreasingly. **[GUIs](#ui-console)** are appearing.
 
 **who is this for&nbsp;?**\
-Techies, power users, and do-it-yourself-ers willing to use a
-**[text editor](https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Text_editor)**, for now.
-If you need a rich GUI and lots of structure, you may prefer a traditional GUI tool.
+Techies, power users, and do-it-yourself-ers, for now.
+If you need a rich GUI providing lots of structure, you may prefer to use something else.
 
 **what are the alternatives&nbsp;?**\
 FOSS tools like GNUCash, Grisbi, KMyMoney,